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PostSubject: Shadow   Sun Feb 13, 2011 7:17 pm

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Name:Shadow
Age:5000
Gender:Male
Race:Dragon
Birthplace:Dragon Lair
Skill:Strength/Fire Magic/Flying/Unarmed Combat/Agility

Biography:The dragon was once the ruler of all locations until a much greater force came and took them over. So now there is very few dragons.

Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
Favored Enemy:
Favored Weapon:
Deity: Aaron
Current Task:Don't have one

Physical:Black Eyes
1000pnd.
8ft.

Weapon:Very Dull Claws
Armor:Weak Dragon Scales

Stength:5/10
Fire Magic:4/10
Flying:1/10
Combat:3/10
Agility:4/10


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PostSubject: Re: Shadow   Sun Feb 13, 2011 7:20 pm

Baddog5949 wrote:
Picture:


Name:Shadow
Age:5000
Gender:Male
Race:Dragon
Birthplace:Dragon Lair
Skill:Strength/Fire Magic/Flying/Unarmed Combat/Agility

Biography:Been around for more then 5000 years. Use to own the whole land untill more races came and killed most of them now there are only few dragons.

Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
Favored Enemy:
Favored Weapon:
Deity: Aaron
Current Task:Don't have one


Physical:Black Eyes/1000pwn./8ft.

Disapproved.
1. What are your skills?
2. Better bio please.
3. Make a better layout.
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PostSubject: Re: Shadow   Sun Feb 13, 2011 7:29 pm

Baddog5949 wrote:
Picture:


Name:Shadow
Age:5000
Gender:Male
Race:Dragon
Birthplace:Dragon Lair
Skill:Strength/Fire Magic/Flying/Unarmed Combat/Agility

Biography:Been around for more then 5000 years. Use to own the whole land untill more races came and killed most of them now there are only few dragons.

Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
Favored Enemy:
Favored Weapon:
Deity: Aaron
Current Task:Don't have one

Physical:Black Eyes/1000pwn./8ft.

Stength:5/10
Fire Magic:4/10
Flying:1/10
Combat:3/10
Agility:4/10
Check your spelling and better bio please.
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PostSubject: Approved   Sun Feb 13, 2011 7:41 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Shadow   Sun Feb 13, 2011 11:16 pm

I disapprove.
Please redo your bio. Also redo your name to more of a rp name.
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PostSubject: Re: Shadow   Sun Feb 13, 2011 11:18 pm

Disregarding Robo-Grammar Nazi, there are a few grammatical mistakes, otherwise, I think it is good.

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PostSubject: Re: Shadow   Mon Feb 14, 2011 3:12 am

Xenbot wrote:
Disregarding Robo-Grammar Nazi, there are a few grammatical mistakes, otherwise, I think it is good.
The robo is kinda right. He needs to redo his bio and more of a roleplay name.
Here is a link for some: http://www.arwen-undomiel.com/elvish/boynames.html


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PostSubject: Re: Shadow   Mon Feb 14, 2011 4:38 pm

Baddog5949 wrote:
Picture:


Name:Shadow
Age:5000
Gender:Male
Race:Dragon
Birthplace:Dragon Lair
Skill:Strength/Fire Magic/Flying/Unarmed Combat/Agility

Biography:The dragon was once the ruler of all locations until a much greater force came and took them over. So now there is very few dragons.

Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
Favored Enemy:
Favored Weapon:
Deity: Aaron
Current Task:Don't have one

Physical:Black Eyes
1000pnd.
8ft.

Weapon:Very Dull Claws
Armor:Weak Dragon Scales

Stength:5/10
Fire Magic:4/10
Flying:1/10
Combat:3/10
Agility:4/10
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